all your playtupuses are mine

ok i guess this thing is looking as good as it's going to get.
i have another blog too, zionofjah.wordpress.com
im thinking im going to post over there because i havent actually posted on there yet...
mmm, sleepy, sorry. was taking a nap.
ummm....yeah.
im sorry im going to have to find a way to post without rambling on about things no one cares about. hmm.:)
see ya' have a nice day cause i told you to.:)


-jaye

by the way, im going by zion over there,or zion of jah. so...

ok, i finally changed the template. now i got to get this thing back together again . bleh >:P

simple short version of writing a melody

Steps
Get some lyrics. You will need lyrics for this method of writing a melody.
Think of how you want your song to sound. Is it a fast, frantic song? A slow, sad song? Having a basic idea of how you want the song to sound is crucial in writing the melody.
Each syllable is worth one note. If you listen to a song, you will realize that the singer changes the note on each syllable. Take your lyrics, and look at the first syllable. If you play an instrument like guitar or piano, play a note while looking at that syllable. How does it sound? If you like the way it sounds, write the note above the syllable. Keep doing this.
Once you are done, play the whole piece on guitar or piano. Then, sing what you heard on the guitar. If you are satisfied, you just wrote the melody! If not, find what you don't like in the song and try doing something else.


credit to: http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Melody

"Fallen Prom Queen" by Zion

were the friends you just bought/
worth the real ones that you lost/
for a second did you think they even like you/
and your boyfriend do you think he'll stay true/

chourus: //don't let your composure crack/
they kill cheerleaders for that/
or at least girl's like you/
yeah they kill girls like you//

my aren't your fans getting loud/
you're not worried about them quieting down/
you keep them well pided/
you think you got it made/
//chourusx1//

are you enjoying the limelight/
do you know your coming down tonight/
did you know they took it all away/
it doesn't have to be this way/
//chourusx1//

such a cold look in your eyes/
such an innocent look as you lie/
what a cruel smile/
so pretty all the while/
//chourusx1//

this is your world,your game/
make the others wonder why they came/
all thhose smarts and you forgot/
that outcast is everything your not/
//that outcast was Jah's* daughter//
//chourusx1//

she'll be looking down on you one day/
look she's already on her way/
you're just another fallen prom queen/
'cause that's just history's routine/


*Jah is another name for God,or Jesus