a song

i wrote another song last night;and well, i want your HONEST opion on it. seriously,even if you just flat out think the whole thing is lame.:]any ideas are welcome too.
anyways, here it is

DRIVING LESSONS

i twist the keys in the ignition,
drivers ed is the mission,
God's in the passenger seat,
the pressures on and so is the heat,
im at the wheel but im along for the ride,
i haave to listen,
forget my wishin,
im blind,
but God can see and He's givin me the keys,
if i dont obey,
try and go my own way,
i'll spin out,
break down,
my head is freakin out,

(chourus:)look out!blind girl drivin!
if i dont trust what i cant see,
i'll spin out!
get outta' the way make room for me.


i hit the gas,
shoot forward way too fast,
God's sayin slow down,
but i dont wanna be found,
im building speed,
im suddenly to scared toobey the one who can see,
i cant see a thing,
but i hear a crash and a scream,
stop!God says,
but its my needs that i seek,
is it too late to slow down,
before i hit the ground,
i hit the brake too hard,
and shutdown and i refuse to start the car,
God's telling me to go,
but i keep saying nonono,

(chourus;x2)


maybe this time i listen,
as once again i start up the ignition,
and this time ill obey,
as i start up and move away,
and its ok its alright,
because God can see and the blind one's me.

(chourus;x2)



uh,yeah...its a work in progress,so seriously;write me back and tell me what you think.:D



-jay